Magic in the Night

Hello! I am Lunicea of Project Comments and I am here to give you feedback on your piece!

To start it off it is a nice piece! The lines are clean and you clearly have your style. The eyes are very detailed but there is something missing. Where is her pupil? I can see the darker blue dips but there is no black or even darker color for her pupil.

Another thing is, how is it so bright when it's night time? The staff could reflect the light of the moon but how is the light in her eyes? I don't do a lot of animated looking pieces so this may just be the style but for me, the lighting could have been better placed. 

The background is very basic and could have used a bit more detail. The stars and coloring is the main thing, the night sky has a very purple undertone with faded ink overlaying that. it can be a mix of blue and pink as well. 

Otherwise, it is very good! The face is symmetrical and the cat off to the side is very well drawn!

Keep doing what you do and pay attention to your lighting! And make sure to continue to practice your style! Adding depth and details that will make things pop!

~Lunicea  (221 words)